This is nice, but I feel like the drums need a little bit more reverb, since yes, you have created a nice soundscape and ambiance stuff, but the drums lack that mood, they feel like added on top of the mix and makes the rest sound a bit weak, specially the snare. The song overall is good, I like the instrumentation that you chose and how the melodic pads accompany each other. Oh, and also, some of the frequencies are a bit loud, specially the lower ones, you might want to eq that, since they take a lot of the kick power and ambiance resolution.
Overall, this is kinda sub-par for you but still good, keep at it :)